Friday, February 22, 2008

Small Steps

This is a story about two boys named Armpit (Theodore) and X-Ray. I'm reading the book Small Steps in my humanities class. He first went to a camp called camp green lake and when he got out he wanted to sort things out from the past and look twards the future. Now he would like to be called by his real name Theodore. X-Ray knows he has money so he tries talking him into give him money to buy tickets for a Kaira De Leon concert so he can ticket scalp them. In other words he is gonna sell the tickets he bought for a mlot more money. Kaira De Leon is an African American pop star. Theodore's neighbor has cerebral palsy and has a lot of seizers. Her name is Ginny. Theodore decides that he wants to ask Tatiana (a girl that he likes) to go with him to the concert. When she says yes he gets happy and then her friends make fun of her and she has to make an excuse to not go with him. So he believes her excuse and he decides to take Ginny instead. When they are at the concert Ginny has a seizure and the cops come over and they want to check his tickets so he hands them the fake tickets that x-ray gave him and Then the cops get into a fight with armpit and he goes to the hospital at the concert and they meet Kaira Deleon there and kaira offers them back stage seats

2 comments:

Khalil J. said...

too little imformation

Mr. Talner said...

Jason,
you have a lot of info here and that is good, but you need to check for run-on sentences. You have quite a few. Be careful, the world is watching. Also,
you need to add the 4 other entries.